Hot Heart
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Hey, guys, I've written a sitcom script for a competition. Still need to tweak it a bit more, but I figured I'd see if anyone wants to offer any feedback as well. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9621731/ShopTalkScriptD1.pdf
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I also think you should have a plotline where someone gets in an accident and the judge sentences him to be the main character's butler.
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Haha, P4. Seriously, though, my main concern is that perhaps it isn't laugh track-friendly...when the competition is called 'Laugh Track' and is for a studio sitcom. Screw 'em, they can take my style or leave it. Sitcoms don't need laugh tracks. =p
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Goood luck!