Darkened Dreams, an interactive novel.

[Laviniya]

So, I recently finished an interactive short novel that I'm proud of.

It's my first attempt at it and it isn't very long, maybe around 10 min unless you try to get all the endings.

 

Please comment and criticize to let me know what you think.

 

You can find it here on my blog.

or you can play it through IFDB.

[Pojodin]

You do a good job of creating the environment and setting up the plot. The color scheme and font definitely set the atmosphere. The progression for each decision is incremented well such that actions don't seem insignificant or lead into too large a series of uncontrollable events. The writing itself could use some work from a grammatical and literary standpoint, but the substance itself was effective.

[MetalCaveman]

It was cool, took me a couple of tries to realize that options you had previously selected were marked in a different colour. Enjoyed the way some of the choices play out

 

 

Got Broken, Heartbroken, Uncertainty and Deception endings. \m/ \m/

 

[Laviniya]

You do a good job of creating the environment and setting up the plot. The color scheme and font definitely set the atmosphere. The progression for each decision is incremented well such that actions don't seem insignificant or lead into too large a series of uncontrollable events. The writing itself could use some work from a grammatical and literary standpoint, but the substance itself was effective.

Thank you for trying it out and thanks for the comment! I do know my grammar is a bit... but I'm working on it.

[Laviniya]

It was cool, took me a couple of tries to realize that options you had previously selected were marked in a different colour. Enjoyed the way some of the choices play out

 

 

Got Broken, Heartbroken, Uncertainty and Deception endings. \m/ \m/

 

Thank you! At first I thought of having the links all in gray, all the time, but I liked this better somehow.